I like the design that you made out of the parts of their logo!
Maybe you can make 1 focal point here and stronger visual hierarchy?
When I read it, I’m not sure what the main words are and which to read first and next.
Maybe the first line - Managing… can be made much bigger and placed on top of the hands in the image?
Use size and proximity for the rest of the text to create groups and hierarchy.
(Hope I did a good job just repeating what you always say, @Alyse-Bayles 
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Besides for hierarchy/ groups, just another small idea - you might want to put that testimonial in a speech bubble/text box, also maybe add icons instead of the 3 check marks to illustrate what each of those points mean.