This is my personal thing, But in general I dont like when ads say “and more…”
If you do more say what you do, If you dont want to say to much, ppl understand the idea of what you do no need to write and more… Just my thing. 
I feel like it needs more breathing space - everything doesn’t have to be huge to catch someone eye - The slogan is quite large and pops out great because of the pink and blue brush strokes underneath the words…
Here I made everything smaller to show you what I mean…
Obviously dont get rid of the background - I just did grey because I didn’t have your background…
I like the other background better
I also like the other background better - its much cleaner looking
thank you!!
hi being that you saw my I ad I figure you are living in Israel now. are you able to help me in regards to pricing what is the average price of flyers, logos, brochures, invitations etc in Israel
thank you