what do people think of this?
its a water bottle label that is going in a hostess package…
I think it’s elegant and definitely on the right track!
First, it looks like there’s a different color stroke than the fill on the gold circles which is detracting from the elegant look. Second, the circles in general are unnecessary, when it comes to elegant, less is more I would take them out and just have the gold lines or make them much smaller… another option is to change the circles into small diamonds- 2 smaller ones and a slightly larger one in middle. other than that, the marble, black and gold look very nice! Best of luck:)
It’s really nice! Agree with @SGreen about the circles but like the style…