@goldie-mezei Thanks for letting me know! I’ll change that…Regarding the client, I’m assuming PR Productions is the name of the company, but I’m actually not 100% sure, as I was contacted by the copywriter who wrote the text for ad, and all my contact with the client has been through her…
Aha, got it!
im surprised that for a company that is charging so much for videos would not have a logo…
@zippy when I sent her the flyer, I asked her about a logo, I’m waiting for her to answer me now…
Looking better! I still think that there is a bit of a contrast issue with the background colors really on most of these versions-the light turquoise version with white and black text is better in terms of contrast, but a bit cold in the color scheme. The dark turquoise background with orange and white is mostly better with contrast, but the title doesn’t pop enough and is a bit dull in the gray, maybe another version of the orange or even something that goes along with it, like a yellow or ochre gold color, to be used in the title and then a bit throughout maybe for the main description line in each box (the line under the times that describe what you get)and/or for the lines on the bottom. Text on bottom is a bit too close to the bottom and those two lines could have tighter leading.
Agreed that there should be a logo, which would also help break up all the text if it has some graphic elements.
Layout wise for the boxes, don’t love the ribbons on the last version, they feel a bit clipart-ish and too old style for this type of poster. Prefer the previous version layouts for the box titles, there were a few options therer (other than the first one)
One more point about the title-leading could be a little tighter there as well, and if you come up with a really strong and interesting way of the creating the title in terms of contrast and typography, that would add visual interest. Also the PR and Productions run together a little and almost appears as a typo, could add some space or have them actually closer as one word with different tints/opacities.
Interesting to note that I don’t see any way a client can contact them on the flyer…
Yes, I meant to mention that as well about the contact info in my previous comments, just forgot (: