Tzedakah Ad

Hi! this is a little time sensitive, how can i make this more “exciting” add a little more something? not sure what to do im a little stuck, would appreciate any suggestions ! thanks!

I really like it
Can you try a more interesting font for the ‘Please help’. I would also try put a white strock behind the Please help with rugged edges to match the torn paper look, instead of the white bar going all the way across. then do the same font and same effect for ‘donation can be made via’. (use special brush to create this stroke)
spacing between ‘without the ol of parnassah’ can be fixed.

thanks for your ideas
how do you make a brush for that?

And any ideas for the words in the middle?

Was thinking of this kind of effect. this is the charcoal-feather stroke in illustrator (should be one under basic stroke)

The torn paper effect will add a lot. Use a different font for the text. Maybe also use a different background. Soft gradient or textured.


How does this look?