Really nice, should you put a period after the word party?
yes thank you for that, will correct
Beautiful ad!
Are you the party rental? I wish I can rent from them but it seems to be based out of the USA. I’m having an event in June in Passaic, NJ.
Beautiful! I wonder what it would look like without the glow around the stamp. I think it’s standing out a bit too much against the ad.
Also, did you create the logo? I’d keep the whole tagline one colour rather than the gold 'P’s at the start of each word - personally it looks like a bit too much. Otherwise, lovely design and copy!
If it’s you who’s doing it, hatzlacha and looking forward to seeing the ad!
Thank you for the tips… really appreciate!
@ShoshanaElisheva there is someone in monsey and BP who does it if that helps you at all
@RivkyH thanks so much! will post it with the small changes… and thanks for your warm wishes!
Gorgeous!
I happen to think it looked classier without the new border. But obviously do whatever you like.
Also, the correct way to write a tagline is with a capital only at the beginning of the sentence. So I would change the rest of the Ps to lowercase. Unless you had a specific reason you wanted it that way - because it’s a lot easier on the eye when lowercase.