Think that the 'O' is too busy?

[gila-garber]

I could just write between 5-50 shekels where it says new and gently used shoes, but I want it to be a bit more noticeable that this is not a fancy shoe store having a sale, it’s more gemach prices.

Thanks!!

[zippy]

i dont think its clear what the 5-10 is referring to . I think you should position it next to the line of new and gently used shoes as planned

[adinacahn]

I would have thought it was time not price

[Alyse-Bayles]

Agreed that we don’t know what it is referring to in the O. Also need to tighten the kerning somehow between the t and i in exciting, looks too unbalanced.