Slush advert

Graphic Design Feedback
#1

hi any thoughts on this add?
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thanks

#2

Hi,
It’s cute but I think it needs a stronger hierarchy
I like how you wrote “It’s time for slush” - make it much bigger - right under it, you should write - Only E1 - have it align right to the ! of Slush!
Underneath that, you can write 5 exciting flavors in that blue box - do bubblegum,grape and apple on one line and then raspberry and strawberry on the next line. only 3 flavors at a time is good where it is
I think you should take out the text best slush in town - it feels out of place on top - maybe move it down to the bottom before the address…or take out completely
The address should be made a drop smaller and possibly the hechsher as well.
Also, I think you should only use the top picture on the left - enlarge it when you enlarge the words “its time for slush”

#3

Can you make the pictures MUCH larger?

#4

and maybe more of a subtle textured/fun background without overpowering the text… unless it’s gonna be home printed and you are saving them ink :slight_smile:

#5

thanks so much! was proper getting stuck! thanks for all your advice!
what do you think of this?

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#6

Much better!!
I think you should take off the outline on the white box and you make the address and time on the same line - divide it with a bullet or a little line like |

#7

Love it!
I would take away the outline from the white square and give the text in it some more margin- either make the text smaller or the square bigger.
ingredients should be spelled with an e. you can make that line much smaller and unbold.
Otherwise its really eye-catching!

#8

Looks amazing! Love all the improvements!
Wording suggestion - Up to 3 flavors at a time instead of only 3 flavors?
Good luck!!

#9

One more point, Can you flip horizontal the slush cups? The straws should face in towards the words instead of pointing and drawing the eyes off the screen

#10

can you also either make the edge of the rounded rectangle off the page or fully visible on the page? its getting cut now

slurpee color corrections need to be a drop more perfect :slight_smile:

#11

Looks great!
I think ingredients is spelled wrong…

#12

yup i was gonna say the same points :slight_smile:

#13

thanks so much for all the feedback!!
Here’s the updated version :slightly_smiling_face:

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#14

It looks so cute!!

#15

Fun. Really nice!

#16

great job!

#17

thanks! :grinning: