Shavuos flyer feedback

comments/critique on this? all this information needs to be on here, and it can only be one page…
obviously, the pricing and things are all placeholder for now…


#1
Really nice! Add margins

Looks very fresh! like #2

  1. the green circle is not really saying anything new as the phone number is already written. Also if your using green i would suggest using a lighter green and incorporating it somewhere else in the page.
  2. Under the hashgacha- capitalize the ‘u’ and align it with the text on top
  3. Product names should be in bold
    Good luck!