Shabbos Schedule Feedback

[NechamaH]

Hi!

I’m designing a Shabbos schedule for a kiruv organization. I’m doing a quick one for this week and then I’ll Iy"H design a nicer one for the future. This is what I have so far. Any suggestions? They want to send it out tonight!

Thank you so much!

[Breindy-S]

Nice!
I think you should write on top of Shabbat - “Please join us for” and then “Shabbat at Meor”
and then underneath like you have it “friends welcome!”
Friday and Saturday look a bit boring - can you either use the same font as Meor or Shabbat?
6:00 Dinner…etc. - You should bring followed by Oneg onto the next line (and the same thing by followed by Mincha)
Also I feel there are too many fonts - You have

1. script by Shabbat 2. thin font by “at” 3. bold block font by Meor 4. italic by Please join…etc. 5. Friday and Saturday - sans serif and 6. the times are serif… I’m personally not a huge fan of serifs so I would change that to the sans serif font of either “Friday…etc.” or “at”
   Hope I’m being clear enough…
   Good Luck!!

[NechamaH]

Thank you!

They wanted to take away “Please join us…” and replace it with the date.

All the san serif is the same font (Argumentum). It just has a bigger font family. Do the different variations look part of the same font?

So in total I have three fonts: a script font, a san serif font, and a serif font.

I tried using the script font for Friday and Saturday but the 'y’s were too long and overlapped the schedule. So I decided to break my “two fonts or less” rule and use the serif font for “Friday” and “Saturday” and add a serif font for the schedule. (Using the san serif font for both didn’t look so good.

Here it is with the script font:

[NechamaH]

I tried figuring out the 'y’s using different glyphs. How does this look?

[Breindy-S]

Beautiful
I’m glad you figured it out!

[NechamaH]

Thank you so much for your feedback! It was really helpful!

Have a great Shabbos!

[Breindy-S]

My pleasure - glad to be of help!