I would love feedback for this advertisement.
Is the typography nice?
Does the ad bring out the beauty of the pic?
thanks:)
I like the second one
The typography could be stronger. What about using a darker green? more of a hunter green so the white text stands out?
The logo is hard to read
the darker does look much better. thanks!
Is the green looking a bit holiday-ish though?
Is the text better?
(She didnt give me the words. I made them up.)
I think the green is a bit holiday looking. maybe try brown/beige
I love the second one! But maybe make the background picture a continuation from the front picture ( also slanted)
I would take the logo out of the box and put it either on top or on the right hand bottom.
I agree with Miriam - the logo should be separate from the contact info, so that the contact info should be more of a call to action
Also tighten the line spacing between the caption, and maybe add an effect like a gold foil or something to give it personality
Thank you for all of your advice! It was really helpful.
In the end, I landed in this direction.
Any critique before I send it?
This is much more striking than the first two options you originally had.
really nice!!
Really nice!
Oh wow it looks really good!