Pesach Ad

[sara]

Hi what do you all think of this ad? Any ideas to make it better especially with the way the text is layed out?

[RivkyH]

All the text at the top is making it a little top-heavy. Maybe you can find a way to put fast, reliable, affordable somewhere else?
I would also change the colour of either the background or the text at the top because the navy and blue are not contrasting enough.

[RivkyH]

Other than that, I love the overall look

[sara]

thanks! Hows this! any other ideas to make the text better?

[RivkyH]

Much better! Looks great!
Maybe try making the ovals bigger or the words inside smaller to give those ‘buttons’ a bit more space.

[sara]

Going to send to the client this way! Ill see what they say

[chavi]

I totally love it!

[sara]

The client just wanted some wording changed, so this is what they went with

[RivkyH]

Great job! Love it!