HI,
Any feedback on this?
Any better way I can align the info on the bottom?
1 Like
I don’t love the greenish and red colors. I would recommend trying a monochromatic color palette, and the background much lighter. Right now the mood is not matching the confidence vibe she wants it to
I love the background and the bottom text. I think the main copy needs to be more attractive. Bolder and try a different color then the red, unless with the red more bold and exciting it will look fine.
Agreed. Looks very washed out.
If you want to keep the matching logo colors. I would lower opacity of background and make the swans white, so they stand out and brighten the ad.
I would also make the swans a bit smaller and the text bolder and brighter.
But really nice layout and theme! Love the idea of the swans!
I really love the idea. Well done
It’s a pencil sketch that I made created on firefly?
How can I make the swans white?
I would just try a white background and bring in the green through the text. Maybe make the bottom of the ad green and invert the logo.
It’s the green that’s giving the muted look
This is her branding coloring, so I’d like to stay with it.
I also designed her a flyer in these coloring
I like this much better, its looking really good now.
Can you change the shade of the background to be a little lighter version of the color you have similar to the house in the second image you sent, this way the pink text will pop more and be more readable.
We’re again putting in this advert.
Whats the best way to anounce it? I fell like this is a bit Yontch…
Which part don’t you like?
I personally wouldn’t put the ‘Join our…’ paragraph in all caps.
Align Price and Address, change spelling of calendar and enlarge ‘mark your calendar’ a bit because not so clear at this size. Don’t know if this is up to you, but the word ‘second’ is not needed in Don’t miss… paragraph, and that also doesn’t need to be in caps.
Its an all caps font.
Should I change font even if I already used it?
I think I would, unless it’s used in all her other materials…
I’d try something a little more modern-looking, maybe a sans-serif font which will match her logo better?
and the idea of how we announce it…
Is there any better way to do it?
Something more modern?
I actually like it. looks good to me.