Hi I would appreciate any comments or critiques on this poster
thanx!
Nice!
I feel you should make the diagonal line thinner as it competes with the focus.
It also looks like the main focus “The Westside…until the words Chavrei Hakollel” aren’t centered fully to the page.
Other than that, I think it is good.
Really nice!
Agree with Breindy’s comments.
Maybe take out the words “which will take place?”
Got the wording from the client but will ask about that
Thanx!