Looking great!
I agree that Monsey and academy should be in caps
The reason why I did lowercase is because I like the way the Y’s fit in between the c and e and the diagonal follows with the figure’s leg…
Do you mean just the M and A or the whole word?
I really love the concept! I like the text in 1 color and only the dancer in pink, also like the dancer at the right facing the logo - creates a good visual pathway when you finish reading the text it directs you back to the left/beginning of the logo… I get why you want to keep lowercase but try a more simple font as the dance is very stylized, the other words should be plain and without curves etc.
Thank you!
You think the one in gold is still too stylized?
most letters are fine but the curves on the m, n, d, can’t decide if a also are distracting.