This is going to be an email inviting parents of special needs children to sign up for martial arts classes. I’m not sure if the colors are too bright to read on a device, so please let me know what you think about that specifically.
i think colors are fine and v. appropriate for this!
if you would’ve done tons of orange text then maybe not but this looks fine… i don’t normally find i need to differentiate between what it looks like on a pc screen and on a smartphone screen…
i would prefer the ‘reserve your slot’ to either be a bigger title or to all fit into the orange stripe as it looks like it’s by mistake.
perhaps the lighter text could be darker/bolder in general as it does look a little fuzzy (and then maybe the bolder text can be all caps and larger to differentiate) or maybe you just posted a low res version…