Makeup Ad Advice

Nice!
I’d change the font of Makeup by Hadassa to something slightly more interesting - nothing crazy, but just with a bit more personality.
Then I’d use the font you used now for it, for the rest of the info (use varied boldness/sizes for diff info)
Also, I think ‘by’ shouldn’t start with capital ‘B’.

I also wonder if you can add slight shadows beneath the brushes to add some dimension to the ad.

I would take away the quotation marks away from the bottom text


Better?
Any ideas for good font for the Makeup By Hadassa?

i would fissure change the font! Since she doesn’t have a logo, it should probably be almost logo-like. I’ve seen lots of scripty type of logos for make-up artists but you can also do a thick font that has a nice twist to it…if that makes sense.
Also, I wouldn’t have the bottom line in italics. I think the font is too big for that…

The shadowing should be more blurred

Maybe add a very subtle texture to the background…

Thanks! Hows this?

I made the bottom line smaller… tried doing it not italic but looked to plain…

the texture made it darker im gonna make it more pink

Can you bring the words makeup by and hadassa closer together? The phone number can be a drop smaller.

The ad is nice but the groups of info looks disjointed.
I also feel like the ad is missing some text (or maybe it’s because the background isn’t so busy so it looks very empty.)
See attached an example of how to lay out the groups of text better. You don’t need to add the extra text I added in, but I feel like it helps balance the ad better…

Also, why is the brush on the top right colored in brown - it looks funny…

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I wonder what size the ad is being… if it’s small, you wouldn’t want the elements to be too small.
@Breindy-S I thought that brown on the brush was from a filter, but I may be wrong :slight_smile:

Could be… I just was pointing it out in case it wasn’t from the filter

Thanks for all the feedback!
The brown on the brush is from the filter…

@Breindy-S I changed the layout of the text but the bottom still looks a little empty… any ideas with just the text I have now?

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Wow! it’s really nice now!
I like the font you used for the text “Makeup by Hadassa”
I don’t its too empty now… it could have more text but this is fine…
The only change I would do - is align the text in the box to be in the center (right now it looks like it is almost touching the bottom of the box and looks unbalanced)

Thanks! ya will do that!

It looks so good now!

Nice👍

Looking great, I would use the 75$ a face icon that you used in the second to last one you sent.