I would change the background so that it’s not a radial gradient.
Also, it feels like there are too many groups of text with different treatments. She should choose another colour for text which should be emphasised, and then make some important text bold. But they shouldn’t also be different size and capitalised as well… The main title can be a different font if she wants, but all other text should be same font.
I like when big text is big and small text is small, if you get what i mean; here I see too many sizes and treatments.
Just some ideas… sorry if it’s too much and hope it’s understandable 