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Any Ideas how I can pull this all together?

Love it!
Maybe make the text ‘when a lakewoods…’ a bit smaller

It’s great! Specifically the top!

I love how you displayed the tickets.

Some suggestions (take it or leave it :slight_smile: ):

The green ticket as the background does look a bit disproportioned. Any way to adjust it?

I agree with hadassyf to make the font smaller.

Everything is vector, until you get to the portrait. Curious to see how it would look with him on a colored background (similar style to the stroke of the $5000) to help carry the vector look through. And don’t have his picture so perfectly aligned with the ticket.

I would left align the bottom text.

Idea: Instead of the green ticket background being a half a stub, why not have a full stub (like you have displayed for the ticket options) and put the information on the left inside the stub as well?

I like it!
I’d change the font of ‘Shopping Spree’. It’s a very well-know typical script font.
I’d also decrease the font size of the long paragraph, and then slightly increase the line spacing so that it isn’t squashed.