Hebrew monogram

[Breindy-S]

Which one of these are looking better?

This is my first time (I think!) making a Hebrew monogram - any tips for making it look more polished? Also is it clear that the name Eliezer Yehuda is in a Samach?
Thanks!

[Yael]

I think it could be a bit clearer…

[shirazuckerman]

make it a distinct circle in the middle

[Breindy-S]

Thanks! is this better??

[shirazuckerman]

yes

[gittyklein]

Looking good!