i love the idea of number 3… it has a lot of potential. although it does need some work.
i do think the thicks and thins would do the job…
I really like them!!!
I think they are all really good. Number 1 is my favorite. For number 3 I agree the coloring from the original should be changed but did like it that the hit was a different color to the other lines… so would keep to that idea…
Thanks everyone for your help! this is what i just sent her hope she likes it!
https://indd.adobe.com/view/7b599d72-b48a-4722-a15b-7967ea73e8a1
I had to use the publish online feature in indesign and its not the clearest…
Really neat and beautifully done!
Looks great and presented beautifully!
wow! job well done!
portfolio worthy 
Wohoo I dont blame her, Its amazing, so clean and professional,
Can i become your cousin 
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I love how it came out!! Where’d you find those amazing mock-ups?
Thanks @estischwartz! Idon’t remember exactly where i got them i think i just opened a few free mockup sites and searched for ‘usb’ mockups and ‘instagram’ mockups…