Flyer for Golf Event

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#1

Hi!

I’m designing this flyer for a kiruv organization. How does this look as a rough draft to send to the client?

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#2

I like the 3rd one best… (like date & top golf on left… otherwise too close to the ball…)
I think the bottom text needs a diff color under it possibly… the dark green is very close to background color… unless you don’t want that part to be super noticeable?

Also, I don’t really like the font of your headline- take a swing… not sure which font to suggest…

#3

This is what we are going with right now.

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#4

B’H the flyer came out nicely!

They asked me to design a matching menu. This is what I have so far but I’m not liking how it’s coming out. Any suggestions on how to make it better?

They want it to be on a 24x36in poster.

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#5

I would frame the menu on partly opaque background.

#6

Thank you so much! Is this what you meant?

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This is another format that I came up with.

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#7

Try the third one on the opaque background.
Maybe have the ball and logo come in front of the background