Feedback on advert

Hi

so they liked this version bh but i just want to know for the future if anyone has any ideas on how i cud make it better/ more exciting…?
thanks!

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This looks beautiful!
Maybe I would change the font of the words “your ad will appear…etc. until the word Shmiras Halashon Email” so something like Montserrat or Work Sans…

thanks so much :slight_smile:

Was going to say the same as Breindy. Other than another font, it looks really amazing!

thanks @chanamiriam :slight_smile: