Hi, any thoughts on this ad?
thank you
how about some silver or teal sparkles or a teal or green ribbon or bow to dress it up. Maybe a ribbon in a zig zag between the contact info and the Shana Jacobs. Also how about changing the Retreat etc. to a font like Raleway (downloadable for free) so it’ll be a little more elegant.
I think you should separate the occasions from the actual items… It just seems really random to have retreat, purim and then t-shirts all on the same line…
I agree about separating occasions and items. I like the text up the side better than just in the middle but the middle seems pretty empty… I would make the white line above contact info thinner. I like the clean look but I think maybe you should put sample products. Personally, if I saw this ad I wouldn’t know what type of customization you’re offering embroidering, airbrushing, etc. or maybe at least write what kind it if you want to keep the look.
Totally agree with @Rivka
The middle is too empty and you should consider putting sample pictures (actually can even be one nice one) there.
Good Luck!
Nice work ! Agree about the middle being too empty.
Also looks like there is a number missing from the phone number.
Looking better! I liked that you changed the size to something smaller.
If you aren’t putting pictures in, I would center the words “Customize your gift”
I see that you added what you customize- (stickers, cut outs etc…)
but I still think that if you could add photos/ graphics it would make it much easier for people to understand what you do more clearly…
(Also, I honestly didn’t even notice that text right away… took looking at the ad more than once to notice…)
Looks much better! The new size looks better but still would add a photo. If it’s like a business card than it’s okay without sample pictures but if I saw this as an ad I don’t know how likely I would be interested because I can’t see what final result looks like. Personalized needs an a after the n. Also, I noticed that some of your words are plural and some singular maybe do all one. Like it says hats, cups, bags but then bottle, sweatshirt…and I still think you should put events on one side and gifts on the other. Also would align the text on the sides. The left looks higher than the right.