Critique

little black bow

What is this for?

it is for someone who creates custom hair pieces

oh cute!
Is the logo going to be in a rectangle or you just put the white words on a black background for us to see…?
I like it, but I’m wondering - is the logo too long?
Here are some ideas that Im thinking:

  1. You can make it in a square - have each word on its own line and then have the lines make a square and leave the bottom open for the bow (and a bit of the lines on each side near the bow)…
  2. You could try this long layout but have “little” and “bow” tracked out and put on top of the lines and then put “black” over the bow in a semi circle
  3. play with some other fonts… maybe use the bow as a B as it looks like a B a little…

little black bow ;ogo
is thus better

whoops this

I’m not sure about that - it looks like random elements…
this is more what I was envisioning…

thank you ill ask her what she thinks

I really like the simplicity of this! but make sure to kern the type!