Critique on this ad? need help it's a rush job

really great! a little hard to read the script …I think since its 3d

i really like it! it looks really cool!

Could you seperate each package to make it clearer instead of one big box. And make better heirarchy within the text?
This is a really random example, but I saw this ad and liked how their packages stood out and were clear…

thank you!

thanks so much!

ok thanks going to take a look