Critique on ad?

Graphic Design
#1

ad 10_7
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I made this ad for a client- any critique?
Not sure if the title looks a bit too blah?
What do you think?

Thanks!

#2

Really nice! I really love the vibe! A few points:
Bottom text should not be in all caps.
Make the body text quite a bit smaller - it’s way too big now.
Same for initial zoom consultation.
I’d try a much more quirky sans serif font to add interest and personality.
Can you move the image more to the left, so the bags are more at the edge and clothing rack showing more? I feel it’ll give a better “spot” for the body text to fit into.

#3

it’s a quarter page ad- so the body text is 9.5 right now
should I still go smaller???

#4

I want to be able to see the logo on the bags clearer. Is there a way to show the logo elsewhere?

#5

it looks really good! can you change the font for free initial zoom consultation

#6

Oh, I didn’t realize… I thought it’s full page. But you can go down to 7 points or even 6…
@ShoshanaElisheva has a point about showing the logo reg, not just only on the bags.

I had assumed that there was no official logo…

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#7

Also, the white circle on the side feels a bit pushed off to the side-maybe you can move it in a bit and make the text a bit bolder inside of the circle, or somehow otherwise make it feel more like part of the ad.
And something about the bar of the clothes rack on the top where it meets with the title letters bothers me-maybe it could come in front of the “e” of shopper?
Nice job overall!!

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#8

Thank you! Yes I noticed that and made the text bolder! Will take a look at the other changes!

#9

I did another ad for her where the logo was much bigger on the bag- that was the focal point of it, so since it’s kind of like an ad series I’m wondering if it’s ok that the logo isn’t as big here- since it’s similar to the other one in the sense that the logo is on the bag on both of the ads?

#10

I feel like the ad should have the logo on the bottom - that’s usually standard! Wonder what @Alyse-Bayles would have to say on the topic…

#11

I think it would look better for the words to not overlap the clothing rack.

#12

thanks