HI! Can someone pleassseeee tell me what’s off with this ad?
Its looking very blahhh. I choose these colors cuz these are the colors on the company website, the logo on bottom in missing, I know. How can I make this look more professional?
THANKSS!!
maybe instead of the picture put objects that have to do with the Business, use a background with some texture. but besides those ides the fonts are to big
Thanks for the quick response! SO thats the one picture they want me to use…
I don’t think it’s so much that the fonts are too big as much as I would probably make better differentiators btwn groups of information. Make the header leading tighter, maybe take off the lines.
Maybe make the most important words in that teal green color from the image to add more pop and tie together better.
Combine your project… text and the transforming visions… text into one body paragraph in smaller at the right of the image.
tighten leading of bottom text as well, maybe you can go somewhat smaller.
G’luck! Dunno if my response is too late!
Thank you.
How does this look? Its not there yet… cant figure out whats bothering me… anyone??
Thanks thanks!
I like the first option better.
This color blue makes me think of aqua.
I feel like the basic fonts can get a little more personal, I like the script font.
Here is inspiration for an ad with a lot of text and how it can be smaller so there is more space for the image
Also, expertise, not experties.
Why don’t you isolate the image and make it more of a cut out. Use that as the focal point of the advert. And then work on the title so that you have more of a hierarchy. Your payment… is not really the right vibe font here. You could put the title underneath. I wouldn’t do all caps.
why not the color of the logo?
the color of the logo is navy blue so I keep staying to the color but its not helping the situation- Chop what I’m saying that a navy ad is a bit hard to make it “stand out”?
Is there something else I can do and keep these colors but to make it stand out and catch your eyes!?
maybe try something like this
Maybe you can add some white to the background or find another way to add interest there?
I’d also combine the top two lines so that they look like one phrase, and would make the 3 other bits of text smaller. Maybe you can put the picture in a different shape? or make it bigger as part of the background?
What’s the significance of this specific image? Cuz I do feel that the teal color there needs to be emphasized again somewhere else in the ad. Not that you should use it all over…
ex. ad I posted yesterday, the main line is this lime color, so I added it also by the button CTA and also made the dryer dial in the image that color.
Agree with @RivkyH pull the top header leading tighter so it’s one headline. I would also make the middle text one block, not 3 separate elements.
So far I like this one the best,
why dont you take all the text on top and make it smaller so you have more empty space.
Lower the design service|space planning|construction to the brown bar on the bottom and then lower the design and build solutions a drop. I feel like then it would be fine.
Hatzlacha!!
Thanks for ur help everyone! Its getting there but not finished yet… How can I finish this in a nice way 
Nice! Still wondering if you can put top two lines on one line, because the word ‘into’ doesn’t need to be capital. Also, maybe remove the ! I find it makes it look less professional.
I would also enlarge the photos at least a bit, they look quite small here.
