Hi,
I made this ad - I feel like it is missing something but not sure
any critique/advice?
Thanks!
I would add some sort of image so viewers know it’s a clothing store. Also, I’d suggest increasing the tracking with the bottom store info. “Excluding new arrivals” can be made smaller and I would move it somewhere else.
Im not loving the background, it doesnt show or enhance what your trying to promote.
I think the layout of the info is good!
Agree with @chavi to change to a more related background, and I agree with @breindy 's comments as well.
Also, I would not put the bottom info text in all caps. All caps is always harder to read. Make it reg sentence case.
by the dates you wrote 31st, if you keep it that way then add rd to 3 = 3rd
either 31st & 3rd, or just 31 & 3
thanks
they specifically wanted something colorful/rainbow because their name is keshet and its parshas noach…
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Maybe you can put a big shopping bag as the focal point and the main text - Keshet parshas noach promotion, 15% off - on the bag. Just an idea to help add more interest.
ok thanks!