Looking for critique on the cards and associated ad…
Beautiful! I love the whole vibe.
Make sure all of the paragraphs are justified centered.
All headings should have the same space after.
I would add a . at the end of each paragraph.
The leading doesn’t all look equal. Did you justify this vertically?
I really love what you did! I noticed that some tefillos are with nekudos and some without… maybe try doing all of them with.
For the advert I would try changing the mockup to be a card standing upright slightly open, where you see the front and a drop of the middle page…