This is a flyer given out from a rebbe for his alumni (It will be texted personally from him).
He will basically take whatever I give him, but I want it to be nice.
Any critique?
Cute Concept! So creative!
a few tiny things…
-maybe rewrite all info including the place,in the scoreboard so its easy to understand and all in one place. RSVP-give email or phone number on how to RSVP?
-also, i would decrease the bevel height, I think you get the concept even if its lower, and now height decreases legibility.
-do you want to add in a chanukah touch? Maybe add a thick border or stripe on the bottom with some chanukah items like menorah, dreidel…
But really cool design! Luv it!