Aufruf Schedule

Hi, anyone have any ideas to make this better?

thank you!

The gold and black are really classy!

Maybe turn the schedule part into 2 columns, since it looks like there’s about the same amount in both sections.
Also maybe change the font on the heading and make Chaim more of a focal point.

Maybe you should do a long shaped card instead of a square because all your information is going down the paper in that direction - there is too much empty space around the text. I don’t love the All caps on the title - maybe you can switch it to not all caps or switch the font to something more eye catching.
You can also add in the date under “Welcome…” there are plenty of ways to make the date look nice and it might add to this card
Also, is there a glow behind the words or is it just my monitor? if there is one, I would take it off…

Nice text layout!
I agree with Breindy that a vertical rectangular card would look nice!
If youre doing that, I would move the monogram to the top center.
I dont like the font of the title and the bottom text, maybe do something script to balance out the rest of the type.
Good job!

I think the words Shabbos Day needs to be aligned with the schedule beneath like Friday. I’m finding the smaller text a bit hard to read not sure if it’s the font, color combo or quality of the image…Also maybe you can indent the details for each thing on the schedule. It might be easier to read. Like TOAMEAH and then indent At our home.