Any tips to improve or change this?

The first font and the second font dont “work together”
I would stick to a sans font and not bring in the serif font
Keep a margin so the text isnt running into the side (like by the word 100 at 0:06.
Maybe switch the background at some points to be black and the text Cyan.
For example when the ? mark zooms in leave the background black as the transition of the ? will already change it to black.

Right! Thank you.
And what about the music?

I love it!

I thought the music worked fine!

Does this look better?

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It’s so nice! I don’t know anything about motion graphics but I was thinking maybe you can stress the word ‘together’ - like zoom into it or something…
Also, the email address (when it appears alone on the page - about 23 seconds) looks stretched vertically…
Otherwise, nice job!

Wow! Thank you so much for your tips/Ideas!!! Super helpful.
I appreciate it! :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes: