Any thoughts on this?

been working on this for to long and want advice to move on with it

You have a typo:
buisness - business

Otherwise I like it. Just maybe use a sharper contrasting font for the heading to make it stand out. The text font is very simple.

thank you! would be a good font.ive been staring at it to much. needs fresh eyes

Very pretty! So neat and striking!
Maybe make the word YOU a little bolder.

You can fix the spelling of the word atracts - attracts, and invitations.


how’s this font for the debut you

Take out the period after invitations.
Also the fonts look very basic

thank you.
how does this look?
should I do anything difrent to the background?

I wouldn’t suggest a serif font, rather a bolder and interesting sans in a heavier weight.

thank you I changed the font curious if this border is helping or totally not and is this new color nice with it?


its supposed to be a green but now it seems more grey

Yes i like the first one that you changed, it has a finished touch now.

I think you should capitalize “artistic graphic designs…”

And your info is a little hard to read.

the best thing would be to make the title a lot bigger and the your business text a lot smaller think of the rule like this header - subtext- info text 90-30-10 percentage wise