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#1

For a different font for the english words…any advice?

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#2

I like it, its very elegant! Just wondering if they wanted the rashi letters specifically?! I would probably not use that Hebrew style font.

#3

Yes, they wanted that. I am working on trying to convince them out of it. But working on the English font for now.

#4

Ok, hopefully you’ll succeed in convincing them out of it;)

#5

I also really like the whole elegant style! I’m not sure if it looks so good with the gradient on the letters. I would try a solid color, maybe white…

#6

Yeah I’m also not fond of the gradient on the letters… I think solid would look best

#7

i find that the outside frame is a bit overpowering the inside text. would consider giving the outside frame less emphasis buy making it simpler, thinner or not the identical shade and strength as the inside txt

#8

Thanks everyone! Is the English font fine?

#9

i think so

#10

Looks nice! Would tone down the frame a little bit, maybe thinner, as it makes the whole design a little busy. Would also try varying the tint of the English vs Hebrew text so it doesn’t run together as much-ie. if you want the Hebrew text to be most prominent, perhaps it could be somewhat lighter than the English text.