Hello,
I created this ad, but the client wants the 'grand opening special/ 10% off ’ to be more striking/ visible. Any ideas?
Any feedback otherwise is also appreciated!
TIA!
I think that the title is what’s grabbing the eye first and a “stamp” is secondary… or even later.
How about incorporating the offer into the title as “10% off fresh fish etc…”
I would swap the logo and info; logo on the left, contact info on the right. It reads better.
And one more thing I see the background is textured paper - for me that doesn’t blend so well with fish at sea / water… could you change that? Sand/sea or something?
Looking forward to see the final!
I love this ad. soooo nice and creative!!!
@Shevy_Friedman cute ad!
What if you bring in a contrasting color and use it for the grand opening special text? If you bring in another color it should be used an accent so use it one or 2 more tiny places also.
Also would you consider putting a banner at the top of the page, instead of the circle in the center for that text? It’s a clean ad but the circle is cluttering it a little.
Another idea, maybe make some sort of cutout ticket type of thing for the grand opening text.
I really love the advert. Agree with above to try another color.
Thanks so much for all of your suggestions! I’ll work on updating it.
How about a dark red background on the 10% pff and then the text in white. This whole series of ads was great!!!