Advert critique

Hi, I’m in middle of designing this ad for a client and this is my last version with all client adjustments already but I still feel it could look better! any ideas how to improve it??

I really like this! Nice Job!
I feel like the focus “only one person…etc.” can be in a nicer font like a serif or the word makeup in script.
Otherwise, like I said, its really good!!

Thanks! i originally did a different more striking font but the client wanted something more classy… so I did this because i also wanted it to match her logo but I think will try it now with something else!

Ok here’s my updated version! hope the client likes it🙈

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I hope so too!!
I think its really good!

She actually liked the original font better in the end as I thought so went with that… thanks for you help!

Beautiful! I like the first one as well