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Really nice! I don’t think the colors are too bright at all!
I would make the TU and university logos white…
Really nice ad!
I love it!
I think the colors are perfect:)
Do you want to nudge the background image down a drop?
I see a border around the subtitles. Is that on purpose?
Is there an extra space before the word Torah in the first paragraph?
really nice work!! Like @al1 wrote, I’d nudge the picture down that the top aligns with take your teaching…
– the subtitles dont look like they are aligned to anything?
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looks really nice!
WOW! Really nice job!
just make sure all is aligned correctly…
Nice! I would just add to the other comments to move the subtitles a little bit closer to the text below to which they each belong, subtitles as they are now feel a little “floating”.
thank you for all the comments.
I had to change to more sophisticated colours since this is a university course…
what do you think of this?
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Has a whole different vibe! I like the image on the side… Could you enlarge it a little and just crop more of the lightbulb on the left? There’s a lot of grey background…
The save your spot subtitle is much closer to the content beneath it than the other two.
Also, I would try the white border in the subtitles in orange or grey - it might make it look more aligned left to the content.
The lightbulb image is a little off centered but It looks nice overall!
Wow its really good!! youre giving me inspo…!
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do you find it hard to find good inspo?
Yea I’m still quite new to this, My mind goes blank whenever I start a new project…!
Though I’m sure it’ll change over time…the more I’ll do and the more I’ll see…
when i started out, my teacher didn’t let us do any amount of work before researching. i find that helped a lot and still helps when looking for inspiration. i also just read a book on how to use inspo within your work…
smart teacher 
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that book sounds interesting - whats the name?
Steal like an Artist.
When you say research, how much research do you do before starting any work? Also, curious to hear your research process.
maybe, but that’s the way it should be, i remember researching art before starting any piece.
there is a famous quote by William Ralph Inge: originality is undetected plagiarism. the question is how do you take other people’s work and make it your own…