I like the last one best.
Another idea is to not put the logo directly on the background.
I still think the images are really small⌠The top text is taking up about half the page but you want the image to be the focus here (I think!) Iâd say to make the top text somewhat smaller and the images much bigger, filling up the whole middle.
Looks OKish, can you brighten up the colours of the advert?
fonts need improving, some thing more edgy, try this,
also Iâm not liking the grey paint stroke behind the logo,
I feel the line that says hoodies, towels, etc needs a separating factor, something that shows its separate. Not so much from a graphic design point as much as an organized point. Would that work?
Good point. Either bars or bullet points etc.
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Iâm glad to hear you share my thoughts! Thank you!
Love it now!
I see the smile is in two, on the right. Whats up? The joke too funny that it made the smile split with laughter?
Its a pair of socks 
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Ah. That makes sense. I feel bad for the smile, though. It literally split into two. Oy
Wow, youâre so deep - mamash feeling for the socks 
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Thanks again for your help!!!
My pleasure!!
Lol! Hahahaha. Yes, Iâm by nature a deep person. Iâm glad i got you feeling for the Tzaros of the sock that split into two⌠wouldnât that be a cute childrenâs book story? Lol
Im wondering if you can make the blue bar on the bottom flow into the white so its a softer look.
Wow itâs looking really good!
Iâd still change the font of âin MCRâ to something with straighter edges, and also make it smaller.
Also, i donât think the word âinâ should have a capital âiâ
Itâs good just everything seems to be huge - the light blue line on the side should be thinner and the text âNew in MCRâ and HoodiesâŚetc. can all be made a little smaller. the name on the bottom looks like a good size for the hoodiesâŚetc.