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Hi, I’m in the middle of the self placed computer graphics course and was asked to help a friend with this advert. Does this look OK? Any comments/ advice?
Thanks!
Advert for the Shabbos playroom-01|690x488

Nice start!
I personally don’t like the font used in the words “Recruiting Volunteers for 2022/3!”
I feel like you could use something cuter to match the logo. See attached for an idea…
Bodo Amat font
Also, Attention years 10 and 11 doesn’t need a stroke - it would look sharper without the yellow stroke.
and the font on the bottom should prob be the same as the font from “become a part of a team…etc.”

thanks so much,i’m so much happier with how it looks now! here’s the updated version…

Maybe you can match the colors of the background to the colors of the logo. I would add some line spacing.

I would write 2022-23 or '22-'23

thanks so much for all the feedback. Here’s an updated version…

This is the final one we using, thanks for all the feedback!

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I love how you matched the background to the logo.
Job well done!

thanks :slightly_smiling_face: