Ad thoughts

I am re-creating an ad that my sister once had made so that i can use it for my portfolio.
Any thoughts on the ad?
And is the top part too similar to the original and any thoughts on how I could change it?
(mine is the top one. the second one with the gradient writing etc is the original ad)


thank you

I don’t know if its appropriate to put copied work into your portfolio… its more for practice

i agree with malky somewhat - unless your sister can actually use your ad?
you are matching her previous branding so i would not call this copying exactly

Why don’t you come up new wording/new concept?
Then it could be counted as yours…

Yes, I am hoping to forward this to my sister and then edit it so it will actually be used… Just wondering what you all thought of the actual design?
thanks

The design is really nice! though the main concept of the design is not your own that’s not really proffesional practice…

ok brill. yup will change it all etc, just doing it for the experience and to up my skills before i go public iyh…:slight_smile: