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Graphic Design
#1

I feel like this ad needs some help
Any advice?

Thanks!

#2

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#3

Really nice! Great higherarchy and direction!
A few critiques:

  1. The centered text is not centered :slight_smile:
  2. The details have too wide a margin on the left and too little on the right.
  3. The details are hard to read with the black lettering on the dark background. Maybe put a slightly transparent white box behind it?

Hatzlacha!
Michal

#4

Looks good! Besides for what Michal said I would make the one liner on top a slightly brighter blue - a little less gray…

#5

thank you!

#6

Shabbos should be capitalized