Hi,
Any ideas on how to fix up this ad? Can you tell that it’s a craft kit?
Thanks!
Maybe put the image as almost built up, but not entirely to make it clearer that it’s a craft to build up, or put some pieces of it or materials on the side…
I only have this picture:
You think I can put it in anywhere? I feel like the ad has too many details already…
maybe “create your own” should be bigger instead of “ice cream shop” so its more clear its a craft…
Agree with @shirar and/or put bags with components next to full model pic
Catalogue is spelled incorrectly
I think the ad looks great! Very neat and eye catching!
I think it definitely looks like a craft! It’s adorable. The words around the 2 circles look a bit warped. You could bring the title down a bit and instead of making the words Create your own miniature (lowercase instead of uppercase) bigger like you did in the second version, I would do it a bolder version of the font and keep it smaller.
Thanks for all feedback! Are there too many details on the side? like the catalog, supplies, pictures…
Looks great!