Hi, If anyone has a chance to give me some critique about this ad I would appreciate it!!!
looks really nice! i personally dont like the shtender in there…
Thanks, I agree but my client want a shtender in there so gonna try to make it look like it comes in a bit more…
Love the ad!
Two of the hats are getting cut off, any way you can shift it around so that it’s not blocking text but is still not getting cut off?
I like your choice of colors and how the speakers pop out at you.
Just a few suggestions: It isn’t so clear who is the organization behind it is because there’s many different organization logos in the ad. I think you should enlarge the bnei emunim logo and put it in a more prominent spot. I’m also not sure I like how things are very close to the edge. For example, I would suggest that the logo of “A Project of” should be more towards the bottom and a little more towards the center. Also, to integrate it more into the design, try removing the white background. Try moving the telephone keypad more to the center also and I would center the brown text box at the bottom about kever dovid.
Hatzlacha!
THanks everyone for your feedback!!!