Ad Critique and Help

Hi! I am pretty new to designing and still learning… I am making a basic ad for my sister who does piano lessons. Please advise me on it asap as she needs it done for this week’s advertiser.
Thanks!

Hi! It looks really good! Not sure i love the boxes around the words…Also, theres so much black and white…Would you consider adding in another color? Looks amazing so far

Thanks for all your comments! I am uploading the final draft, please help me with it again, my sister wanted some changes so it is slightly different!

Just looking now at the previous ad and I like the look better, if anyone could advise me on how to put the new elements into the old design I would appreciate it!

add spacing (like margin) and give it a natural border