Ad Critique and Help

Hi! I am pretty new to designing and still learning… I am making a basic ad for my sister who does piano lessons. Please advise me on it asap as she needs it done for this week’s advertiser.
Thanks!Piano-Lessons-final-r

Hi! It looks really good! Not sure i love the boxes around the words…Also, theres so much black and white…Would you consider adding in another color? Looks amazing so far

Thanks for all your comments! I am uploading the final draft, please help me with it again, my sister wanted some changes so it is slightly different!Piano-Lessons

Just looking now at the previous ad and I like the look better, if anyone could advise me on how to put the new elements into the old design I would appreciate it!

add spacing (like margin) and give it a natural border