Ad Critic

[Itasilver]

Hi,

I made this ad for myself, would love to hear your critics.
Thanks!

[shirazuckerman]

its so cute! only think the script text on the beige looks off cause its not flowing from one letter to the next

[chavi]

I really like it! I just think you need to make the copy more visible. you hardly see the white text on top.

[Itasilver]

Is it better now? Does it look sharp and eye catchy, or lame?

[sarahgreenbergmn]

Love the ad!
Also not loving the font used on the bottom (the script one)

[Itasilver]

better?

[sarahgreenbergmn]

I think so!
Also, is it supposed to say at the bottom analbum…?

[Itasilver]

is this one sharper?

[Gzryl]

I think the previous background coloring was better, maybe try it in between , a little lighter than this.
I think the pictures are better on this one, the previous one gave a little washed out look.
maybe try working on the text on top to make it more visible.
hatzlacha!

[ChanyT]

I love it! I think the coloring in the first one was nicer.

[Itasilver]

This is probably being the final.

[shirazuckerman]

love it

[hadassyf]

wow! very striking and diff!

[Breindy-S]

I like this coloring best

I feel like your contact info is very small and not so readable - give it some leading between info

[sarahgreenbergmn]

i agree with @Breindy-S
Also like the not script font for album…

[zippy]

What about making the word album White and the word design a bit bigger and also white. I almost missed the word design? (prefer the first design)
. contact info is too tight on leading as already mentioned,

[Itasilver]

Thanks a lot for all you in put.
What you say to this?

[Itasilver]

This is being the final! the creative studio is sharper here than real.
TYSM😊!