How can i add interest to this project, I feel it is a little boring. Except text, everything else can be changed. It is supposed to be an introduction to what will become a weekly Q&A in a local advertiser
Thank you so much everyone
If anyone has a spare minute, I would really appreciate advice - it must be sent in by tonight. I would love to incorporate an image of some sort, not sure what would suit the article…
maybe each week you can insert a vector image (the same style) that has what to do with the question.
You can place it in big on the bottom right.
Looks great!
the ‘lady’ in the bottom circle kind of looks like her hair is in an afro… is it meant to be a snood? maybe try to find one that looks more like a sheitel
Yes, lady is supposed to look like she is wearing a snood, but i did it myself, maybe that is why it does not look good… I will change it to a different type of sheitel (just have to find one) does this coloring work better?
I love this new coloring and added circles…etc.
I think the bubble should be turned the other way - like in the the first one, have it turned toward the speaker so the little thing on the bottom should be facing the right side. the next one under it should be facing the left side…etc.
The only hard thing to read is Dear Balabuste - maybe make it in the dark maroon color you have in the faces and circles in the background…
to fix the snood - you might just need to draw a little further down her neck to make it look more realistic
Thank you so so much, such a huge help.
Looks Great!!
Very nice!
If it’s not too late…Not sure if it is a mistake or on purpose but I think there should be another silhouette/person for the top right speech bubble. I think if you make the snood come down a little lower in the back it would be better but otherwise looks fine like some type of hat.
Also the yellow text on the bottom right is a bit hard to read and if there is a way to make that text stronger and more exciting since it’s the first week intro and the goal is for people to send things in.