This is a first draft of an ad I created (for myself, I do web design
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Would love to get feedback! Not looking quite right yet
This is a first draft of an ad I created (for myself, I do web design
Its really nice!! I love the rocketship image.
I think the focal area isn’t clear enough what this ad is about. I took me some time to chap why WOWWW was spelled really wrong - maybe its because there is no contact info on yet… like if there was a logo showing its a web design company, ppl would chap more…
Anyways I think you should put the words “The future is now. The future is” in white.
The WOWWW can maybe be written vertically next to the picture… I think it might look nice if you use the color of the background and lower the opacity…
Make the bottom text come alive a little - “Do you have a presence…” keep as is
and then “Its not rocket science” - text could be white and put in a colored box on an angle…“we get your business…” keep how it is
and then “Take a step into the future now” maybe do all caps
I’m also thinking - maybe you can do more of a futurist type of font for the focal point - but the one you have there is really ok
Good Luck!!
Love the 3D pics!
Take a step into… should be a few fonts bigger and bold or you can do all caps.
Would make “the future is now. the future is” much bigger in size.
I also think you should add 3 dots after the future is…
if you start with WWW and then add the wow = it may be clearer that you are referring to www from web rather than reading it like the word coolllllllll- like teenagers write (unless that was your intention
the curvy txt looks a bit amateur so try other positions for it like moving the Future is WWWWOW to under the rocket
Love!
Agree about the WOWWW, looks like a watermark type of thing like you’re protecting the design. I think having it straight under the other text with the rocketship overlapping it a bit, or have it typed on a path (circle) Like a smile shape. All in all great job though!!
Thanks so much everyone for your suggestions!
Will play around and post again