Hi, can people give comments/critiques/suggestions etc…thanks!
Very cute! I love the layout of the ad! I wouldn’t write “Crazy discounted prices”, I would choose a more professional word or just “Discounted prices”.
What do you mean by “Also: donate shirts…”?
Its really nice! Im just not sure about the word “also”…
Nice!
I don’t think its necessary to write Contact on the bottom - it’s obvious
you and your dont need to be capitalized.
I think it would look cute if you did a little heart next to each thing instead of the flags you have there.
You should make the 3 points a little smaller in font size and closer together - just so there is a little more breathing space.
also agree about the word also 
Okay, this a totally different layout, I changed the wording…basically this flyer is for my sister who !
works in a special needs camp where alot of the counselors buy cute matching t-shirts for them and their campers…so she is collecting t-shirts from her friends that don’t need them anymore for whatever reason and re-selling them for super cheap…also buying some new ones and selling them for cheaper…the one thing I am most not sure about is the diagonal text along the bottom line…something about it doesn’t look right but it needs to go somewhere…
This wording is better but the other ad had a better focus.
What’s the font size here - it looks pretty big.
I feel like all the body text can fit into the middle white space if you make it smaller.
(You can stretch the sentence to be more than 4 words on a line)
here is edited version. also, just to clarify, this not an ad that is gonna be printed, it’s more for whatsapp status/social media and some email…
looking better!
Can you overlap the shirt with the black on top and also bring the contact info down more and to the right…
I wonder how it would look to have the words Do you going vertical and then want coordinating…etc. and then on the “same line” or also going vertical and next to have t-shirts…etc
then underneath that write "if so…etc. and under that write straight donate your old t-shirts…
I think (if you chap what I mean) it will look more grouped and have a better focus.
and btw, it doesn’t matter if its being printed or as a status…etc. - it still needs a focus for it to catch peoples eyes.
how does this look? i like it better when the t-shirt overlaps the lack on top but then i feel as if there is too much white space…Screenshot 2022-02-20 223103|405x500
much better! I told you to overlap the t-shirt with the black cuz I was envisioning something a little different and you would need the white space in the middle but this layout also works.
nice job 
wow its looking good!
Im not sure if its just me but im having a hard time reading what you put on the pink now. Its not clear. “matching tshirts for you and your camper!”
and the pink info on the black is also a little hard. maybe do the pink contact info in white.