Hi all,
I’d love critique on all aspects of this tri-fold:
Layout, style, fonts, colors, any nit-picking in general!
(Specifically, wondering if there are too many styles going on there?)
Thanks so much!
Inside:
Outside:
Nice!
I’m not loving the red (especially together with the green - looks holiday-ish) Maybe do a dark blue instead - blue will probably also make it look more professional
I dont love the two fold tikvah lifeline part - its a little confusing how to read it…
I love the icons and all the little random illustrations, paint strokes…etc. I feel it gives it such warmth!
Im not crazy over the white box that you have by charities… maybe just lower opacity so its not so white.
and also dont love the squiggle on the front cover since its the only “illustration” on the cover. How about taking the sunshine rays from the logo and putting it around the words “Shaping the future with hope” and also making it white but lowering the opacity on it…
also, one more thing - can you try a different font for the word “hope” on the front - it doesn’t give off a feeling of hope and warmth since it looks hand drawn ( I know you used it through out the brochure and it looks good in small, but when enlarged - it looks a little like someone wrote it out of depression or like homeless… Idk - thats the feeling I get, maybe other ppl think otherwise…)
Anyways, its a really good start!
Post the revised one!
Good Luck!
I agree with Breindy’s comments… won’t repeat everything, but I also feel like that two-fold section is hard to figure out where to read.
Love love the secondary font you used, along with the illustrations, I think that’s great!
Nice work!!
Maybe I would lighten the background, or switch to white to make the text easier to read.
Great job
Thanks so much @Breindy-S @goldie-mezei and @malkysalzer for your critique!!
Thanks Breindy for all of your good ideas!!
I do like the red for the warmth that it adds.
Here is an orange-r version (less contrast but no holiday associations;) and a blue-instead-of-green version:
Here are updates.
I made corrections to the color + some details thanks to @zippy 's #1 piece of advice:
Print everything out 
Thanks Zippy!!!
I’d appreciate all additional critique 
This is so nice! Caught a type somewhere when I glanced at it quickly- organization, not with an S. Was in the highlighted box
Beautiful! Cover font is great and I like the scribbled sun and other details
Now that you made the red more orange - I like either with the blue or green…
I’m not loving the scribbles in the paragraph of “an oasis of hope and joy” and by “Tikva at a glance” (personal preference though…)
Cover looks nice along with the rest of the brochure!
Thanks Breindy and Goldie for your feedback!
I really appreciate it.
I actually like the scribbles… I think its adds to the personality of the brochure. Great job!